Are You Scared
Never Talking Again, Facebook, and Other Unfinished Topics
We Were Together For Like Two Weeks
On Being A Great Ex-Boyfriend
Stay Talking About My Ex
A Guide To A Man's Firsts
Five Other Things Women Can Do Like Guys
Women Should Just Cheat Too

Teach It
January 20th, 2010 at 13:54 | #7Reply | Quote
Nice post, Jozen. I enjoyed the story’s dialogue and how you moved the story along with transitions and “signal” words.

Side note: And you know good and well her boyfriend only got back together with her because she agreed to his ultimatum, “We can be together, but only if you stop hangin’ out with .” Can’t say that I blame him. This girl seemed almost ready to….(never mind)


sleepingbeauty
January 20th, 2010 at 14:19 | #8Reply | Quote
hmmmm very interesting..soo is it safe to say that she won b/c getting back with her boyfriend was code word for ‘her school won’? ;-) nice..


me-me
January 20th, 2010 at 14:30 | #9Reply | Quote
lol—

what are the odds that her boyfriend, knowing what he knows, is now creeping and entertaining while she’s being watched and behaving in church?

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